I thought the whole Battle of Yavin looked pretty damn good! Most of the GOUT shots blend quite well, go by fast, and themselves didn't look good in the original version and so really don't stick out at all.

That's too bad about the pan down from the crawl. I'd vote for having the pan begin sooner in order to have the planet reveal on musical cue. That way at least one cue is on time rather than none. Not a big deal or anything, since it's been that way since 1981.

As far as the shortened shot with the Y-Wing, I think it plays perfect the way it is in the workprint, and I prefer it to the way it was in the Partly Despecialized version.

Those damn sabers are the only thing that sticks out in my mind as a bummer, and that's the truth.

Overall, beautiful work. I'll keep pouring over the workprint and let you know of anything else I could add.