hmm.. ok
for me if you could just fix Lando's lip sync - during the sarlacc scene
.....and if you listen to the music right as the end credits begin you will notice the music suddenly gets loud....then again and again....like a staggered volume increase - almost blew my ears off the first time as i was using headphones lol cos the ending is so good now - its that sudden jarring of the music that spoils it. Oh and theres a few repeated frames during the credits near the beginning - I think its whats causing your DIY credits to show over the top of the movies original credits in one place....have a look you'll see it. - watch from near the end of the funeral pyre scene to a few minutes into the credit and you'll notice the music and credits issues.
...and.....I wasnt going to mention when Luke senses Leia & han being captured...again.... hey thats 2 they owe him man!
...um right, try something different - instead of a few quick shots of Luke during the de-carbonising scene, for instance you could try....
extending the death of yoda scene to include - luke walking back to his x-wing - and interacting with R2 ...he stand ups and moans about how can he possibly carry on alone (eww... cut that shit out, no whiny Luke pls)...i think you can show footage of Luke knelt down with R2 - and then cut him talking as he stands up - next shot is close up of Lukes face then theres a nice pause just before the Ghost of Obi Wan starts talking - and he looks round...
you could cut it there - delete the audio of bens voice and input the jabba Theme! - and cut to next scene. Or use those shots but have Luke sense something odd going on....and jabba's theme playing...somewhere before leia rescues han....but after yoda dies....hmmm that doesnt give you much room for manuvering....
also I know there is an awfull wipe between Yoda dying and Luke walking to his xwing in the original movie but i no you can do it! :)
For me thats all i'd like to see fixed...
I think...well thats what most stands out in my mind at the moment.
you can do it! :)
I dont mind the way you've done endor - im quite happy with it.
I've made a 40min super 16 (cant call it super 8 cos its widescreen) edit - and for me Jabba's palace and endor were the hardest bits for me to do - and what you managed with Jabba's palace was pretty amazing - especially with the usage of Leia footage. I didnt do anything like that, im just not patient enough to try!