Hey nice video, the black and white style works well - i thought the flaring effect from light was a bit overpowering it seems to obscure the scene too much at times, but not sure if thats the same in the source you were using.

The narration was good, sounded proffessional, I thought the writing and voice acting might be the hardest things to pull off convincingly but it seems to come naturally to you.

Its good to actually get a strong sense of War from a Star Wars movie and thats what your prologue sets up quite nicely.

It will be good to see what you have in store next :)

edit: didnt comment on the music as enough's already been said about that - but seem like good choices so far