SpenceEdit said:

I'm going to respectfully table the crawl suggestions conversation. I think I've got it where I need it, and I don't want to over-analyze it.

Fair enough.

I hope you don't think we're trying to take over your edit, Spence - I think I speak for everyone here when I say that we just want this to be the best Return of the Jedi it can be, and as insignificant as the crawl may seem, it's the first thing anyone will ever see of your edit, and it needs to grab them and make them want to continue watching. I don't know how many times I've downloaded a Star Wars fan edit, popped it in, and been immediately disillusioned when the half-assed replacement crawl comes up. I just don't want that to happen with this edit, since it seems so very promising.

Anyway, that's the last I'll say on the subject of the crawl.