I rather like your version of the crawl ChainsawAsh. I think it starts out better and "doom for the galaxy" works better. If L8wtr is not busy, Chainsaw Ash's would be an ideal crawl to create.
Post #476593
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- The Aluminum Falcon
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- Return of the Jedi - The Spence Final Cut (Released)
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- 21-Feb-2011, 8:36 PM