Spence, your latest crawl is good - I can live with that :)

I was thinking about what Bingowings said, and I've thrown together something with a little more punch. I left your final paragraph the same.

The Rebel Alliance has been driven to the fringes of the galaxy. Still burdened by the terrible truth of his father's fate, Luke Skywalker has returned to Dagobah to complete his Jedi training with Master Yoda.

Meanwhile, in a daring attempt to rescue Han Solo, Lando Calrissian and Chewbacca have infiltrated the court of the vile gangster JABBA THE HUTT. Upon learning of Chewbacca's capture, Princess Leia has impatiently rushed to Tatooine to free her friends.

Little do they know that the GALACTIC EMPIRE is secretly constructing a new DEATH STAR. When completed, this ultimate weapon will spell certain doom for the small band of rebels struggling to restore freedom to the galaxy...