Bingowings, I agree. I think the middle paragraph could use some more punching up. But I think the first and third are solid on their own.
Post #476537
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- Erikstormtrooper
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- Return of the Jedi - The Spence Final Cut (Released)
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- Date created
- 21-Feb-2011, 5:38 PM