Yeah they originally had quite a lot of dialogue at the beginning of the scene, but I like the idea of them working together organically, like cool badass force siblings should. I'm glad that got a little laugh, it gets me too. I see what you mean with the music, but I'm really a fan of how it plays currently.

I got the new crawl, it's exactly what i want it to be, but it's a bit logner than the usual crawl. It kind of has to be, I have to set up a bit more than the original version does. To make it fit I had to speed it up a little, but not so much that it becomes difficult to read. I tried to have it fit the music as best as I could, it just doesn't fit exactly like the original crawls. Again, if you're a serious purist this might upset you, but this edit isn't for serious purists anyway.

Here's the crawl text:

After learning the terrible truth of his father's fate, Luke Skywalker has returned to Dagobah to complete his Jedi training with Master Yoda, knowing he must again face Darth Vader.

Meanwhile, Lando Calrissian has successfully infiltrated the court of the vile gangster JABBA THE HUTT. Princess Leia has received a message from Lando that Chewbacca has been discovered and captured. Growing impatient for Luke to return and fearing that Lando will soon be captured as well, the Princess develops her own rescue plan.

Little do they know, the GALACTIC EMPIRE is constructing a new DEATH STAR in secret. When completed, this ultimate weapon will spell certain doom for the small band of rebels struggling to restore freedom to the galaxy...