That was great.
I love that you cut the meet between Leia and Wicket, but do we still see the approach of someone with a spear? It seems like it should have happened before cutting back to Han.
I think it's a valuable bit for building suspense about the unseen Ewoks. Without that hint, they simply come out at the trap which can't be as effective imho. The trap means more if we think "uh-oh, they already got Leia".
I know I read that you were going to keep that bit, didn't I? With the right suspenseful musical sting, wouldn't it work?
I hate complaining about anything on this awesome edit.