Bingowings said:

As for the duel falls, I'd cut a few of the first falls (it's a little too repetitive)...

Agreed. It's funny, but feels a bit awkward when the same footage gets used twice. Maybe (and I'm sorry for my spelling here) fast forward the 2nd part of the 1st fall - you know, the part where you use the same footage again.

Like, have him gain more speed as he falls. That would also explain why it's so hard for him to stop. Cause of the speed, you see.

And to make it seem better you could also add a harder landing/crash sound-effect for the second time he lands on the platform.

I hope you get the idea!