By the way, Spence, the Vader line that was being referred to earlier is the line he delivers to his stormtroopers after losing Luke at the end of ESB, but before returning to the Executor:
1980 theatrical: "Bring my shuttle."
1997/2004 SE: "Alert my Star Destroyer to prepare for my arrival."
The second line really sucks in that context, but I agree that it could work well in your edit.