Ripplin said:

I also thought the idea of Obi-Wan talking as he's falling was good, too. :)

Yes, I'm planning on stealing that. ;-)

I have a few ideas for the final duel segments but haven't had time to work on them yet. I'd like to have Obi-wan get trapped by the force field multiple times instead of just once. Also have him yell NOOOOOOOOOOOOO before Qui-Gon gets killed, and then use Qui-Gon's reaction shot where he gives a strange look at Maul to have him looking at Obi-wan instead - kind of a "WTF are you yelling about" look.