I understand you're trying to do something fresh. I really get that, and can work for some eyes. At the end of the day make sure you're making it the way you want to. I take advice, but if I disagree, I disagree. Because in the end, it's what I want to see.

Now as far as what I think, I started to like it, but then it got old going back to black. Have you thought of taking an Indiana Jones title approach? I don't know, it's just what I saw in my head.

Keep plugging along man. You never know, this could be one of the better edits out there when you get done with it.