Hey Spence, I really liked the clips you posted.

The ending worked for me. It was nice to see Luke standing at the very end, facing the future as the last of the Jedi. It was a nice little coda. I've also never really like the Special Edition city montage, but with the ghosts gone, you need something there, so the cities work in this scenario.
The ewok celebration seemed looped and was slightly distracting.

I also really liked the sail barge treatment. It was cool to see Luke and co. finally say, "Jabba, we came to kick some a** and chew some gum, and we are all out of gum" and then do it. I think the audio could be tightened up, but visually, it really works nice.
Luke's line about pointing the gun a the deck seemed off, but maybe that was the youtube.

I'm interested to see how the rest turns out. So far so good!