This looks cool - like what you did with the ending, although ive seen jedi a thousand times the funeral pyre scene never really stood out to me. It makes much more impact now without the dumb ewok party ending. Didnt even miss the ghosts either.
Not sure about the music that begins the sequence tho, is it from episode 1 or 2? but i like that it ends on the skywalker theme or force theme whatever its known as now... that along with the the Look on Lukes face as he watches the funeral pyre burning really makes the sense of closure on the story stronger.