I've just finished watching Volume 2. This one is a little more difficult in that it's already cut as one continuous story, unlike volume 1 which was individual episodes. Some judicious trimming throughout might be worthwhile. I think I would move the siege of Coruscant until later in the story. As it stands now the siege seems to start before Anakin has even left on his quest. I think I would cut the siege so that it starts immediately after Anakin's Vader vision. Cut from that directly to Yoda meditating. His abrupt "waking" from his meditation then has a dual impact as it can be perceived to be both because of Anakin and also the invasion. It also gives us a reasonable cause for Yoda not having felt the invasion until it was underway.

Just some thoughts.