Pagz said:

The Gathering Storm

Pretty generic. Like the Coming storm title, it reminds more a terminator fanedit rather a spaceopera. Not to mention all the drama and the noir feeling that all these titles have, are changing the tone. I will reference the old good space adventure, Starchaser the legend of Orin. Pretty solid title and its focuced on the protagonist. plus we never see a storm. I like the word warps but it doesnt feel to the star wars style. As Phantom menace title failed dont fall into the same pit.

It is a period of civil unrest. The Galactic Republic, which has stood for over a thousand generations, is in decline. Corruption, greed and apathy have taken root. The seeds of evil are sown throughout the Galaxy.

The wicked Trade Federation has seized control of the Alderaan system with a blockade of deadly battleships. As the senate looks on, the supreme chancellor calls upon the Jedi, guardians of peace and justice in the Galaxy, to resolve the conflict.

Jedi Knight Qui-Gon Jinn, overseeing young Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi's trials of knighthood, has been dispatched to liberate Alderaan from the tyranny of the Federation and restore freedom to the peaceful system....

Galaxy, Jedi, Alderaan, Federation, system, were used twice. I would like more variation and less specific names.

I like some words that give the ANH feel so its an up. I like to see Bingo's idea of having the shots of the cruiser escaping from the trade fed and the whole movie will be reordered.

Still looking for a title that I think works and is dramatic. I'm liking The Gathering Storm more than my previous iteration The Coming Storm. All suggestions happily accepted, no guarantees that I will take them though ;)