Cool clip man :)
Will you be changing the line 'young Skywalker' back to the original and more effective 'Luke Skywalker'?
I feel by the Emperor claiming that they have a new enemy and announcing him to be young Skywalker, for me at least implies a certain amount of familiarity which doesn't work in the context of that scene and the overall importance that scene plays regarding Luke and Vader.
I know this scene has been discussed to death a while back but with you mentioning that it's only a temp audio track, I was just curious.
Cheers!