The visual components are squished and squashed to the point where it's rather unattractive, the visible background grain around the logo adds to the effect as does it's unappealing positioning.
Is the label tear meant to convey the effect of an old VHS tape pulled out of a remainder bin (if so adding more signs of wear is needed to pull that off)?
On a general note you don't have to post your images so large. If you scaled them down so the whole image fitted into the forum tramlines people could right click to open the whole thing if they were interested.
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Having it dangle over the edge poses the risk of shunting the thread out of whack so nobody can read it.