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DuracellEnergizer
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Was star wars truly meant for children?
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Date created
13-Jan-2011, 8:49 PM

ray_afraid said:

DuracellEnergizer said:

In an earlier draft Annikin [sic] pinched a girl's ass then had sex with her in a closet. With that in mind it's kind of hard to believe Star Wars was intended to be a kids' movie first and foremost.

Wow. I'm gonna need some proof here. Not because I think you're lying, I just wanna see for myself.

From the Star Wars rough draft ... 

Kane puts his arm around his son, who has been making eyes at one of the cute young female aides. He bows before the General.

GENERAL

He takes after his mother! (They laugh) It’s so good to see you.

KANE
It’s wonderful to be with another Jedi again. There are so few of us left.

The cute aide goes back to her duties, flirting with Annikin as she passes. The young warrior pinches her on the ass, which startles her, but she goes on like nothing happened. 

And later ...

Captain Prue retreats to a computer station. The general looks around for Starkiller.

GENERAL

Starkiller!

Everyone near the general turns, but Starkiller doesn’t show.

GENERAL

Where is that boy? Montross!
Montross rushes to the general and snaps to attention.

GENERAL

Page Starkiller.

Montross goes back to his station and a few moments later, Starkiller is paged over the P.A. system. The general waits, watching the big board. Eventually, Starkiller stumbles out of an enclosed computer closet, fastening his pants and tucking in his tunic. A moment later, the cute female aide rather sheepishly exits the computer closet. She is also in the process of putting her uniform back together. Starkiller rushes up to the general and snaps to attention.

You can find the entire draft here: http://starwarz.com/starkiller/2010/03/the-star-wars-rough-draft/