Very good effort Harmy.
I've only watched it on my monitor but I liked what I saw. The subs will take a little getting used to only because I'm not used to seeing it that way.
The gout footage is most notable during the sail barge battle but that's to be expected. I was quite happy with the rest.
What version of the credits did you use? There's thx.com at the end but I didn't see any SE credits when I scanned through.