I'm out of it for a little while and everyone gets delusions of grandeur!
Couldn't resist. Haven't been on the forums in a couple of years I think, and I come back to find what is easily the best fan edit I've ever seen. Well done Adywan, this is a brilliant piece of work. You've made all the edits I have been planning to make in my versions for some time, with the addition of really clever edits that I never even thought of. I'm super impressed.
At this stage I'm definitely considering using your "Revisited" edits as the base for my OT edits, because they're just so good and make the number of changes I'd have to make myself so few.
The only changes I would make are based solely on the overriding intent that is the impetus behind the edits I'm currently undertaking of the saga: Preserve the Secret. That is, don't spoil the best moment in the saga (I am your father) by giving it away in the prequels. As such, I've been editing the Prequel trilogy with that in mind, and my edits to the OT will follow the same logic, which means tiny subtractions from dialogue. Dropping the reference to Vader being Obi-Wan's pupil for instance, dropping Vader's line "When I left you I was but the learner" but keeping now I am the master, dropping "Darth" from Obi Wan's response (as it implies Darth is his first name instead of a title). Other little subtractions and shufflings as well.
For anyone interested, I've posted a thread about my editing efforts here.
Great Work AdyWan, you have my undying admiration.