I agree with the basic premise of increasing the saturation and rotating the hue slightly from red to yellow. However I think you've gone way over the top.

Have you calibrated your monitor at all? Even if you don't have a colorimeter (most people don't) needed to achieve an accurate greyscale, you can still use a colour bar pattern with a blue filter to calibrate your monitor's hue and saturation settings.

The GOUT SW is also overly bright, and needs adjustment to either the gamma (g-force) or level curve (pwnage and ed sw '77) to bring it closer to the theatrical experience.