Yeah, the transitions do kinda suck.

And I might just put the yoda scene back to the way it was. It seems off because that line about him being a jedi was taken from closer to where he dies so I guess his voice is more horse.

And what was so hard to follow about the ben scene? The only things I cut were: "You told me vader betrayed and murdered my father", but since Ben immediately starts talking about his father I think it can be inferred that he knows luke was talking about his father.

And the only other things I cut were lines about "a certain point of view". Everything else is the same.

But I'm starting to get overwhelmed, every change I make results in me having to change something else to compensate and I'm getting way out of my league. Creating new sequences and transitions, I'm not used to doing that. And frankly I don't have the time. And schools about to start again so you guys can expect the same lack of activity soon I'm afraid. I might have to put the scenes back in the original order just to get this out.