I got and watched it.

I liked the cuts. Jerjerrod seems a bit smarter and Luke seems like he has grown up. The transition between planets I think could be improved, but it proves that it isn't awkward to switch from one planet to another in this new viewing order.

The cuts in Yoda's home worked very well also.

The crawl needs to be replaced, of course, but I knew that it wouldn't match when I started it, so I didn't sweat it.

I think the only thing that was weird for me (and this is a problem in the original also) is that Ben knows Luke's questions before Luke can articulate.

Luke: Why didn't you tell me?

Ben: I know you are talking about Vader, so I'll talk about that first.

Luke: Yoda said there was another.

Ben: I know you weren't talking about what you wanted off of the Burger King value menu, so the other one is your twin sister.

Of course Ben is going to know what is on Luke's mind, but I would prefer some transition into the conversation somehow. But as I said, that is a problem of the original.

I'm trying to upload the file again so others can watch it.

EDIT: Here you go.