Erikstormtrooper said:

Possessed said:

Sluggo said:

The music sounds great!

I think the clip works fine without the orbital shot of Tatooine. It is R2 and 3PO out in the desert. Where else would it be other than Tatooine? If you wanted to announce it is Tatooine through the music instead of a visual, you could drop in a very small segment of music from the original Star Wars score from when the droids were wandering in the Jundland Wastes.

Well, see from a storytelling point of view it looks fine. The main reason I added it was just to slow things down a bit. Imagine how fast that would be, that would have the story literally jumping from luke and r2 on degobah and r2 and 3p0 on tatooine in the span of about 9 seconds. Now with the orbital shot, it's at least 15! lol. You're right tho, it doesn't look very good. Maybe I should replace it with a generic shot of just a desert of tatooine? Would be a better establishing shot and still slow the pace down.

What about a slow zoom in on the matte painting of the X-Wing and Falcon parked in the desert? Could that work as an establishing shot?

Yes that would be great... I didn't know such a thing existed. Could you point me in it's direction?

(Sorry, I really don't know much about star wars other than whats in the movies and what I've happened to read here)