This was sought through entering the Berne convention for Moral Rights,

Capitalize "Convention". maybe modify to 'Berne Convention on the issue of Moral Rights'. The full title for Berne is "Berne Convention for the Protection of Literary and Artistic Works." people might think it's "Berne Convention for Moral Rights" from the way it's currently written.

Are the first two pictures just 'of that time' or are there specific people whom we're looking at?

In August of this year, I wrote a lengthy article on the dearth of American film preservation law--I should have just let George Lucas write it!

The opening clause might get confusing as years pass. Drop it or get 2010 in there somehow.

from the new musical sequence in Jedi, youthful Hayden Christensen replacing old Sebastian Shaw in the same film, Greedo shooting first out of political correctness, and the totally different colour scheme implemented in 2004.

replace 'and' w/ 'to' so it's from the new music to the totally different colour.

Someone else was in Washington too.

Maybe add a return before this line to separate it from the paragraph above, give it some stand out drama.

since director Richard Marquand died in 1987, and need to have Kershner and Kasdan be the decision-makers for Empire.

and that out of respect for the deceased Richard Marquand Jedi be left as it was.

Can we get some love for Brackett?

document bearing the title The Berne

either a colon or dash after title. or put it in italics or quotes. quotes will give everyone a clue when the title ends.

anyone else at the end say to themselves "and to all a goodnight"

Great recap, paints a nice picture.

but people who side with the idea that artists should have free reign might come down hard on this.