vaderios said:
Still a mockup for the bad vignette effects...
Matching the continuity and the lightning of the previous shots this shadow area should not be present. Not only apears on the sky but it embraces the fog of the lake too.
Ady fixed some of them in hoth battle, hopefully he might try these too
This is another sort of alteration I'm in favour of. It doesn't interrupt the edit, it doesn't stand out as a change to most people, and there are no changes in the elements in the shot. But what is different is great... the re-composition of the whole thing is very subtle; removing the blandness from centred shots like this helps maximise the effectiveness by re-focusing the eye on the important element in a more dynamic way. Basically, it gives the shot some shape, where the original has none.
In fact, I'd say Angel could have gone further with it. Jedi is replete with totally unimaginative shots like this, far, far more than Empire (which is generally very well shot indeed) and there is some real improvements to be made especially at the compositional level.