Lord Grievous said:

I know I'm a bit late with this, but I really like this shot:

Although I think that the transports should be moved a bit further back to enhance the scale.

I agree. The transports need to be further up in the picture, or the men in the left side of the picture need to be removed. The relationship between those men and the men in the foreground sets a scale that clashes with the scale between the foreground and the starship. There is no way to convince me that the starships are located at a lower elevation than the pilots.

The haze over the starship in the original picture helps a lot with the scale as well. A background element should never have better focus than the foreground.