Well, if it's to OTrize, I was watching ROTS and have a suggestion for the shot of Anakin and Obi "emergency landing" on Grievous ship: what about if, instead of having them doing that fancy jump out of their starfighters and turning on their sabres, you have them appear from an unexpected place, thus, not showing us the jump.

Like having a shot of the starfighters with nobody coming out, the droids get close to the ships to see what's going on and suddenly we have Anakin and ObiWan appearing and chopping them off. Replacing the music with the star wars theme, just like when Luke and Leia cross the DS bridge in ANH. I think it could work

Then, in no way Artoo can handle that transmissor Obi gives him. It shouldn't be shown, as if Artoo somehow kept it in his interior, or anything.

And finally, where Palpatine remains captive, what are those red bars at each side of him, speakers? Because I think the general ambientation of that scen is almost fine but that stuff....