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Post #452792

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DF Shadow
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Info & Ideas: ESB and ROTJ Wishlist
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Date created
11-Nov-2010, 4:38 AM

Here's an easy edit that could help the believability aspect of the ewoks helping to defeat the stormtroopers in ROTJ.

Check out this dialogue tweak I just made.... http://www.zshare.net/audio/8258809178746cba/

Basically I subtly altered Palpatine's dialogue so that instead of boasting and exclaiming "an ENTIRE legion of my BEST troops awaits them" he instead simply says "a legion of my troops awaits them".

To me this change still gets the same frightening / threatening point across however the viewer no longer expects to see some awesome killer stormtroopers in action. Also, the point is no longer stressed that the troops are "the best" which they clearly aren't.