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Monroville
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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9-Nov-2010, 10:16 PM

My only real beef with the last shot is the trajectory of the Falcon - regardless of the galaxy being a "galaxy" or newly-forming star (or whether it is replaced by something completely different, slightly different or altogether pretty much the same thing), just seeing the Falcon veer off to the middle to upper left just looks wrong.  You almost want to yell out "Hey Lando!  The friggin galaxy is THAT way!"

I would suggest changing the shot so instead of the Falcon doing its left turn into deep space, possibly use the shot of the Falcon approaching Yavin IV (or a similar rear end shot) to show it heading towards the galaxy or at least AWAY from the fleet/ the audience (even if "the galaxy" is a forming star, there is nothing saying the Falcon could zip away under it or towards the lower arm).

Mock up will appear within the next few days.

Also, will there be more rebel ships, as well as possibly bigger ones (not Home One size, but maybe something as big or slightly bigger than the frigate but along the lines of what the transports look like)?  I know Ady is reworking that shot (due to the travel paths of multiple ships converging into each other).

Something else too... would there be any alteration to the other ships around the frigate to adjust for consistency in sizes?  It just seems that the rebel blockade runners should be much larger in comparison to the frigate, considering how big that side window is that Luke and Leia look out of (in comparison to the bridge window of the blockade runner).