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Post #452243

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nightstalkerpoet
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Episode 1: The Phantom Hour (Completed)
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Date created
8-Nov-2010, 5:54 PM

So, I'm a good portion of the way through... I need to get ahold of ADigitalMan, because I decided to use his cut as my new basis for the film, and need permission to release it.

-I've added back in the introduction to Darth Maul, and the additional probe droid scene.

-I attempted a different cut of the podrace. Should smooth things up without jerking around too much.

-I added Amidala addressing the Senate. As was stated in reviews, this edit did have an issue with telling the story in non-action sequences, and this scene was a pivotal one narratively.

The Phantom Hour is now more like The Phantom Hour and 9 Minutes... but I think I can deal :P

New workprint will be out soon.