-I'd like to see you shy away from names like General Bad-guy and Darth Evil-doer like we got in the prequels.

-Although I like what you've done a lot more than the prequels, it does seem to mimic TPM a bit with Naboo being replaced by Alderaan. Anakin and Obi-Wan instead of Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan navigating through nature after a misguided landing and stumbling upon beasts on their way to the city to find a queen/princess. Although, to be honest, I'm not that familiar with the TPM. Maybe I'm wrong about this.

-What happened to the Mandalorians? They defeated the Jedi and then...? Went back home?

A good read, interested to see where the clones come in.