If you notice in the edit, I really just spliced whole scenes together without editing individual pieces. In a completed version of this edit, most Jar Jar antics would be gone, and probably the midichlorians.

If you take a look above, I did mention that upon further viewing (I've long since deleted anything but the avi from my pc) I would have preferred to reinsert 2 scenes with Darth Maul, and one senate scene.

I do feel though that oddly enough, most of the film narrative takes place during lightsaber/battle scenes.