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Post #450096

Author
The Golden Idol
Parent topic
The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Date created
25-Oct-2010, 4:38 PM

AEmovieguy said:

Greetings,

 

I thought a first post in this thread was only appropriate as I was introduced to this site through the Fanedit Forums after creating an edit of one of the Prequels.

 

And I bring a gift...the removal of two droids from the elevator scene in Episode 3 (this is just a fun little edit):

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_m-oXTz9cI

 

Take care!

 

 

 That's much better! My only suggestion is to cut some more of Obi-Wan's lines, specifically such lines as "Always on the move" (it's a strange line, you should just show him sighing as Anakin gets out of the elevator) and "Oh, it's you" (its obvious that he recognizes him when he shuts off his lightsaber, he doesn't need to say it).