I rather like it.
The only thing that strikes me as odd about is the fact that the entire first verse is a question. It doesn't bother me that the was based (or at least is rather similar) to an old drinking song. What wasn't?
Post #447945
- Author
- Sluggo
- Parent topic
- I strongly dislike the American National Anthem
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/447945/action/topic#447945
- Date created
- 15-Oct-2010, 5:40 PM