I mention that fact in my post.
I find the mouse unfocused and destructing. Now we have to see 3 things at once. The energy beam the red light and the mouse.( you have to use wisely whatever radical to guide or impress the eye. never distract it (aka rontos in your face)
You have to find a balance of what can be in and what is not. Or at least make a camera movement that shows all the elements with a rate that can lead to our main subject.Cinematography first.
-Angel