Ok, the first thing I have to mention is removing the line

"I see through the lies of the Jedi. I do not fear the dark side as you do"

These lines are given as Obi and Anakin are walking. So removing them means you have to explain how they now are standng in completely different spots. Even if I were to keep the footage and remove the audio, you can still see that Anakin is clearly saying something. So as much as I would have removed it, I think it has to stay.

The rest of your ideas I'll look over when I get some time to sit down and really look the scene over.

And I dont mind the large posts at all. 8)