The blood is interesting still a nice spark sequence like we see in JJ's star trek when they get shot could be interesting too.
I still dont know what to do with the two officers that are watching the escape pod. The location of where they are makes no sense to the perspective since the pod goes down. I have to make the shot more star destroyer-y if not replacing it with a shot from an other movie. I dont know for sure if it adds anything.
Mr J: I would love to see how this sequence you ve done can be handled with an alternative way of editing and look less like random flashy shots.
-Angel