THE FRIGHTENERS (released 1996/directed by Peter Jackson)
Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zmQxM32PWRM
I’D PREFER TO SEE AND HEAR THE PHANTOM MENACE END SOMETHING ALONG THESE LINES INSTEAD -
…the Neimodian control ship gets blown up…
…and we continue as normal, as the droid army shuts down and Jar Jar says ???, and we end on Captain Tarpals saying ???
…and then I’d CUT to Darth Maul swiping his lightsaber over Obi-Wan…
NOT SURE YET WHAT OTHER SHOTS I’D STILL WANT TO INCLUDE AT THIS EXACT POINT HERE - NEED TO STUDY THE SCENE MORE
…we hear Obi-Wan grunt as he STARTS to leap upwards (NOTE - I’M NOT including the silly shot of him flying up)
…and then I’d CUT to Qui-Gon’s body as the lightsaber beside him shoots into Obi-Wan’s hand as he somersaults over Maul, then cuts him in half…
FILL IN MORE SHOTS HERE, AS WELL AS WHAT PALPATINE SAYS AT END OF THIS SHOT BELOW
…and then I’d CUT to
FILL IN MORE SHOTS HERE, AS WELL AS WHAT IS SAID
FILL IN MORE SHOTS HERE
…DO I END ON THIS SHOT OF JAR JAR BOWING HIS HEAD AS WE HEAR A MOURNFUL R2?? -
…OR DO I END ON THIS SHOT OF PALPATINE?? -
…OR CAN I PUT THE PALPATINE SHOT SOMEWHERE BEFORE WE END ON THE JAR JAR SHOT??