I will break this down into 4 points, logo, crawl, republic ship and finally jedi fighters.

The logo:

Though it was a nice surprise to see a new logo and thought it was wonderful, i think a new logo isnt actually needed. Wouldnt fit in with the rest of the saga despite i know this isnt a saga you are doing as of yet. I say stick with the old.

The crawl:

The crawl is funny as hell and made me smile but for people not knowing of this project they may read this and think this is a spoof and will not take this seriously. Don't like the red colour if im honest. Just feels wrong to me.

Republic Ship:

Looked amazing and really felt like the OT which in way plays into my next point about Jedi starfighters. I would keep what you have done to the RepShip.

Jedi fighters:

Jedi fighters look good but i think you should keep with the colours of the original film. By showin the RepShip and then you see the Jedi fighters it felt to me like a preview of yet to come by the time we get round to see the OT. Make the RepShip colourless and the Jedi ships colourful. So later in the movie you see the empire slowly taking over. I think the same should happen in regards to the clone troopers. After the Empire starts to take over we should see colourless clone troopers.

Well these are just my opinions and hope i explained clearly.