Hey The Cutter!
I just found out about your edit because I ALWAYS imagine a "duuude" after that hangar bay line in the beginning, so thnx for fixing.
I love that panning thing you did with lightsaber fights!! (I have no surround sound, but even on headphones it sounds awesome.
Another thing I like in general is that you explain your reasons well with examples, comparisons and explanations.
I hope you finish soon. I've watched a couple edits of episode 3, but haven't found my ultimate yet...could this be it? ^_^
Best of luck.