daneditor said:

In Shuttle Tydirium I was looking to build up the Luke/Vader conflict. In my edit the scene resembles the Luke/Vader ship to ship conversation at the end of TESB. Which is a good thing to be reminded of. As soon as I get my hands on a decent copy of the Luke lightsaber building scene it'll definitely be going in to try to add some more to this conflict - which the original film neglects.

I guess that makes sense, but it's a 'quieter' scene than the one in ESB. Perhaps there's a way to shorten his lines, so it seems like he's talking to himself? "Vader?" Show Piett waiting for Vader's order, then back to Luke, "I'm endangering the mission...". Or something like that to make it just between the two of them.

It's probably not an issue if you haven't seen this movie a million times. ;) Fingers crossed that the lightsaber scene is useable.