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Post #437790

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Erikstormtrooper
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Save Star Wars Dot Com
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Date created
4-Sep-2010, 11:42 PM

Good breakdown of the GOUT. It might be a good idea to find a way to define that term earlier in the piece, since it could be confusing for those who don't know what a medical condition has to do with Star Wars.

And I noticed in the numbered paragraphs that describe the GOUT's problems, there are 2 number sixes.