I do love the new shot! But... something's wrong with the shadows.
In the old shot, shadows were almost invisible due to the heavy clouds covering the sun, but you can see the direction of them on the ground.
In this mock-up (sorry for the bad quality) I show you first the direction of the shadows and the fading sun (high contrast), and then what should the shadow under the carrier look like (more elongated in the 'nose' direction).
