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Post #436286

Author
Anchorhead
Parent topic
Save Star Wars Dot Com
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https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/436286/action/topic#436286
Date created
30-Aug-2010, 2:54 PM

Just throwing another aesthetic idea out there.  You have a lot of information on the home page.  That's great, because there is a lot of important information that needs to be addressed up-front.

I think an outsider or uniformed guest might find it easier to read and maybe a little less Star Wars geeky if the copy wasn't so stylized. I'd left-justify the headings, change the font to Times, and leave the body ragged right. Giant blocks of justified copy without breaks can be a little cumbersome to read, particularly on a computer screen.  I  also added color to the copy to give it a little more depth, tying it in with your page header.

Just a thought.