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Post #429617

Author
Anchorhead
Parent topic
Save Star Wars Dot Com
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https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/429617/action/topic#429617
Date created
6-Aug-2010, 9:35 AM

I'd like to point out that I really dig the layout. The original one-sheet works perfectly for your site. I also think the placement of the portion of the one-sheet you chose - X-Wings en masse - works very well with the whole idea of Saving Star Wars.

I made a few small changes that I thought would sort of grab the reader\passer-by with regards to your already well done layout. I saturated the color of your graphic and altered the text a touch to make it jump out a little more. I also moved the paragraph headers to left justified. Just an idea. I know you're still very early in the process.