TRON (released 1982/directed by Steven Lisberger)
Fanedited Trailer (a nicely ‘updated’ one I came across recently) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jp2gGqgn3Fw
Teaser Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8L5QdNINm68 NOW GONE! Will look for replacement soon.
Teaser Trailer 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDo_RSVJKKs NOW GONE! Will look for replacement soon.
Theatrical Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKrGw24aTqk NOW GONE! Will look for replacement soon.
Theatrical Trailer 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uge43csYHxE NOW GONE! Will look for replacement soon.
TRON: LEGACY (released 2010/directed by Joseph Kosinski)
Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e1dHhktFLPs
Theatrical Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L9szn1QQfas
Theatrical Trailer 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qj9of4RkCLQ NOW GONE! Will look for replacement soon.
NOTE - Just in case anyone happens to stumble across this old ‘Trailers’ thread of mine sometime, I’ve just temporarily used this space to put the following edit ideas/shots on here to remind myself about them at some point! 😃 -
BOTH THE ‘SOLO’ MOVIE AND ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TV SHOW WERE A HUGE DISAPPOINTMENT FOR ME FOR NUMEROUS REASONS. I STRONGLY DISLIKED THE OVERALL PREMISE OF EITHER STORYLINE, AND WHILE I COULD ACCEPT THE CHANGE OF ACTOR IN ‘SOLO’, I ALSO DISLIKED THE OVERLY-JOKEY WAY HAN WAS CHARACTERISED AT TIMES COMPARED TO THE MORE LACONIC WAY HE COMES ACROSS IN THE ORIGINAL TRILOGY. SO I WAS ACTUALLY INTENDING TO NEVER BOTHER WITH EITHER OF THESE ‘STAR WARS SPIN-OFFS’ EVER AGAIN - EXCEPT THAT I HAPPENED TO REALLY LIKE A SMATTERING OF MOMENTS AND ‘WORLD-BUILDING’ SEEN IN THEM, ESPECIALLY 'SOLO’S EXCELLENT ‘MONORAIL HEIST’ SEQUENCE, AND SCORE. SO I WONDERED IF THERE WAS ANY WAY AT ALL TO RE-ORDER THINGS INTO A CUT-DOWN, ‘MINI ADVENTURE’/‘EXPANDED UNIVERSE’ EDIT OF SOME SORT, WHICH WOULD INCLUDE THE ‘MONORAIL HEIST’, AND WOULD SATISFY ME. HERE’S WHAT I CAME UP WITH -
LATEST NOTES - JUST IGNORE SOME OF WHAT I ALREADY WROTE BELOW, AS I DEFINITELY WANT TO INCLUDE THE ‘WORLD-BUILDING’ AND ‘ACTION’ OF THE OPENING ‘SPEEDER CHASE’ SCENES OF THE SOLO MOVIE WITH HAN AND Q’IRA AS THEY ESCAPE FROM CORELLIA…EXCEPT THERE ARE NO ROMANTIC TIES BETWEEN THEM, AND HAN IS JUST HELPING HER TO ESCAPE TOO - THEY JUST HAPPEN TO GO THEIR OWN SEPERATE WAYS AFTER THAT…AND THEN HAN HOOKS UP WITH CHEWIE AT SOME POINT AFTERWARDS…WITH NO ‘BACKSTORY’ NEEDED TO SHOW HOW THEY MET! - SO THAT THIS IS JUST A SERIES OF ‘MINI ADVENTURES’ INVOLVING ‘YOUNGER’ HAN.
MY (PREVIOUS) NEW OPENING SEQUENCE FOR SOLO - I want to change the NARRATIVE of the story altogether for myself, and totally DISCARD the first 25 mins. altogether to make it seem as if Han and Chewie are ALREADY buddies when the movie begins, and have only recently become involved with Beckett who is planning a ‘heist’! - I didn’t necessarily want to see an ‘origin’ backstory for how they actually met in the first place, and by getting rid of the first 25 mins. I also get rid of a LOT of other scenes and dialogue which I REALLY disliked too!
(As with the ‘standalone’ ROGUE ONE, I want to include the familiar logos and fanfare to start things off. But again, I’m NOT going to include the movie’s actual MAIN TITLE anywhere)
START OFF WITH THE USUAL 20TH CENTURY FOX/LUCASFILM LOGOS AND FANFARE -
NOTE - I NOW WANT TO BEGIN WITH HAN AND KIRA AS PARTNERS-IN-CRIME IN A MID-ADVENTURE CHASE, BEFORE KIRA GETS CAPTURED, AND HAN’S CLOSE-UP SHOUTS THAT HE’LL COME BACK FOR HER (OR MIGHT CUT/or FADE??? AT CLOSE-UP OF SNARLING DOGS JUST AFTERWARDS IF SOUNDS AND MUSIC TRANSITION TO PLANET SUNRISE SHOT OKAY) - WHERE WE NOW SEE HE HAS HOOKED UP WITH ANOTHER PARTNER-IN-CRIME, CHEWIE!
CUT TO START OF PLANET SUNRISE SHOT FOR MY NEW OPENING (comes immediately after the Han and Chewie ‘shower’ scene) -
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START OF SHIP FLYING THROUGH CLOUDS SHOT -
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CLOSE-UP OF HAN’S FACE IS NOW OUR FIRST INTRODUCTION TO HIM -
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START OF SCENE OF CHEWIE JOINING HAN ON GANTRY IS NOW OUR FIRST INTRODUCTION TO HIM -
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At this point add some other shots and descriptions of what Han says to Chewie (I’ll be discarding the talk of Han asking his name, and saying he’ll need a nickname!)
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NEW THOUGHTS! - DISCARD my initial Han/Chewie introduction idea above, and INSTEAD introduce them with the gang about to do the train heist. HOWEVER, I might just FORGET about editing the WHOLE movie, and just make a ‘MINI PREQUEL BUDDY MOVIE’ of only the Han Solo/Chewie/Lando characters for myself, and GET RID OF EVERYTHING ELSE in the SOLO movie altogether! - I’M SORRY TO HAVE TO IGNORE A FEW SCENES THAT I REALLY LIKED IN THE MOVIE, BUT IT HAS TOO MANY THINGS I REALLY DISLIKE IN IT, AND IS NOT WORTH MY EFFORT TO RE-EDIT THE WHOLE THING FOR IT’S PARTICULAR ‘BACKSTORY’ WITH A FALCON AND INTERIOR I HATE THE LOOK OF, AND ALSO I LIKE THE NOTION OF HAN NOT BEING SEEN TO BE HAVING A STRONG RELATIONSHIP WITH ANY OTHER WOMAN UNTIL HE MEETS…PRINCESS LEIA!
START OFF WITH THE USUAL 20TH CENTURY FOX/LUCASFILM LOGOS AND FANFARE -
- VERY LATEST UDATED IDEA * - I WANT TO MAKE THIS A KIND OF ‘DOUBLE-FEATURE’ EDIT, SEEING AS I’M CUTTING DONW SO MUCH FOOTAGE FROM BOTH THE ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TV SHOW AND THE ‘SOLO’ MOVIE, AND I’D START OFF WITH MY INTENDED ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ EDIT, AND THEN CUT TO THE SILENT BLUE ‘A LONG TIME AGO…’ WORDING AGAIN (I MIGHT EVEN HAVE THE YELLOW ‘STAR WARS’ LOGO RECEDING SILENTLY FIRST?), ONCE IT CONCLUDES, BEFORE MY INTENDED ‘SOLO’ EDIT BEGINS, AS A WAY TO SEPARATE THEM INTO 2 DIFFERENT STORIES?
NOTE - THESE NEXT SHOTS BELOW WHICH HAVE A ‘C-T’ TYPED ABOVE THEM ARE TAKEN FROM THE ‘CAP-THAT’ SCREENSHOTS SITE, AS THE ‘MOVIE-SCREENCAPS’ SITE HAD A PROBLEM WHEN I TRIED (AND THOSE MARKED ‘SW S.com’ ARE FROM THE SEPARATE ‘STARWARS SCREENCAPS’ SITE) -
I MIGHT SIMPLY START WITH THE SILENT, SILVER ‘LUCASFILM’ LOGO (PERHAPS THE LARGE VERSION OF IT), FOLLOWED BY THE SILENT, BLUE WORDING (AGAIN, PERHAPS THE LARGE VERSION OF IT -
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…as we continue as normal to the SOLO main title -
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…as we continue as normal as Han speeds through Corellia -
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…as we transition as normal to Han getting out of the speeder and crouching down, as he sees goons with snarling dog creatures shout Get inside now! Hurry up, you’re late! at vagabond kids -
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…as the kids enter a blue-lit entrance -
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(then I think I’d miss out hearing a goon then shouting Proxima’s gonna have your hide!)
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…and we continue as normal as we hear a female voice say Han!, as he’s pulled through a doorway -
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…as we transition to a close-up of Q’ira and Han suddenly facing each other -
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CUT to the wide-view of Q’ira and Han facing each other in the doorway, as we hear a voice shouts Look down here!, as Han pulls Q’ira into the room saying Right, listen…I was in the middle of the exchange, I’m handing over the coaxium, and his goons jumped me, but I showed 'em…
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…as we transition as normal to Q’ira and Han facing each other side-on, as Q’ira says How? -
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CUT to Han (with his mouth still closed) suddenly holding up a vial of Coaxium -
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…as we continue as normal, as Q’ira whispers excitedly You held onto one of the vials, as one of the vagabond kids shouts Han’s back!, and Han and Q’ira crouch down and say (ADD REST OF DIALOGUE HERE) -
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…as Han ends by saying This is gonna work…Q’ira, you always said one day we’re gonna get out of here…this is it!, as Q’ira says What are we waiting for? and smiles -
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CUT to Han and Q’ira going to leave the blu-lit den as we hear a goon shout There he is…hey, you two!, as Han grabs Q’ira to run the other way -
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CUT to Han and Q’ira running out of the den (although it’s daylight now, I think I just about get away with it after having spent a little bit of time in the interior first) -
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…and we continue on as normal until Han says We bribe our way through the checkpoint and we’re free -
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CUT to Q’ira saying We won’t have to take orders or be kicked around by anyone, as Han says Ever!, as a large speeder suddenly looms up behind them -
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…and we continue as normal with the speeder chase, until we see a POV shot from underneath Han’s speeder -
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NOTE - AT THIS POINT, I’D DISCARD THE SPEEDERS BREAKING THROUGH A BARRIER AND SMASHING THE TALKING SECURITY DROID!
CUT to this wide shot of the speeder chase -
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…as we continue as normal, as the large speeder ends up chasing Han’s speeder into a huge factory -
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as we continue as normal, as Han decides to escape through a very narrow section up ahead, and Q’ira says Han no, we’re not going to make it! -
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as we continue as normal, as Han says Oh yeah?, as Q’ira yells Han, I’m telling you it’s too tight!, as Han pulls down on a lever -
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(NOTE - I’D THEN DISCARD THE SHOT OF HAN SAYING WATCH THIS!, AS IT JUST COMES OFF AS REPETATIVE FROM WHAT HE SAYS IN THE ORIGINAL TRILOGY, AND ALSO MAKES HIM SOUND LIKE TOO MUCH OF A SHOW-OFF BY SAYING IT AGAIN)
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…as we continue on as normal, as the large speeder is blocked, and Han and Q’ira run from their stranded speeder as the goons and dog creatures go after them, and we eventually END on this shot of them running towards freedom -
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CUT (OR FADE?) to silent black at this point briefly -
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END OF HAN’S CLOSE-UP -
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END OF CLOUDS -
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END OF CHEWIE COMING DOWN STAIRS ON SHIP -
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TRANSITIONS TO Chewie leaning on railing as Han says Thanks for helping me get outta there -
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TRANSITIONS TO Chewie growling -
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TRANSITIONS to Han saying No, they only took you 'cos of me -
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END of Han saying HEY! -
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NOTE - I MIGHT end up missing out the above shot, as the angle of Chewie’s face is at a slightly different angle compared to the next shot - and it might be better if he growls LESS and stays SILENT as Han continues his dialogue at this point.
CUT to Han saying I got us a real sweet deal here, we do this one job with them…we make some real money, and then we’re free -
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TRANSITIONS TO BECKETT, VAL, AND HAN CHECKING OUT THE MONORAIL BRIDGE -
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END OF SHOT (finish wording here) …'COS SOMETIMES YOU PUT YOUR FAITH IN THE WRONG PEOPLE -
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TRANSITIONS TO 4-armed alien putting down a knife, saying Oh come on Val, you look so sincere, plus have you ever tried to disinvite a wookiee from anything? Not a good idea!, as he climbs wall -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett kissing a handgun, and throwing it to Han** -
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TRANSITIONS TO Han catching the handgun -
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AND THEN ADD LOTS MORE PICS OF VARIOUS POINTS IN THE MONORAIL HEIST SEQUENCE HERE.
…and after the heist goes wrong, we eventually we see Beckett kneeling in front of the graves of Val and Rio, as he stands up and punches Han who falls to the ground saying What the hell?, as Beckett shouts You don’t listen, and you can’t follow orders…do you have any idea what you’ve done?..we were not stealing for ourselves, we were hired by Crimson Dawn! - as Chewie growls worriedly, and Han says Crimson Dawn? - as Beckett says Now we owe them a hundred Ks of refined coaxium, when they find out that we don’t got it…they’re gonna kill us - CUT to Han’s face as Beckett says Do you have any idea what it’s like to live with a price on your head?..the only thing to do is to go to them, maybe I can find a way to make it up to him - as Han sniffs and says Then that’s what we do - as Beckett say No…he knows me, not you…if you come with me, show your face, if they don’t kill you…you’re in this life for good - Han says If you find some way to square this…do we still get our money? - Beckett says Maybe - Han says For me it’s worth the risk, then asks Chewie How about you? - Chewie ROARS, AND THEN WE EVENTUALLY COME TO THIS SHOT OF HAN SAYING That’s yes -
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(NOTE - OR I MIGHT END ON GROUP SHOT ABOVE WHERE FEMALE ALIEN SAYS HE’LL BE WITH YOU SHORTLY, INSTEAD?)
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(NOTE - Then this is how I’d re-edit the next scene to keep Dryden to a minimum, as well as removing Han’s overly-goofy moments, and removing Q’ira being overly touchy-feely with Dryden, and making her silent and more intimidated by him)
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TRANSITIONS to Q’ira, Han, and Chewie walking up towards a gambling establishment, as Q’ira says …it’s a long shot, but it’s worth a try…he’s the best smuggler around, he’s slipped through the empire’s fingers more times than anyone else
NOTE - THIS WAS MY ORIGINAL INTENTION AFTER BIT WHERE BECKETT APOLOGISED FOR HITTING HAN - START OF WHOLE NEW 'JUMP-AHEAD-IN-TIME. AS WE CUT to Q’ira walking with Han and Chewie towards an icy gambling establishment, as Q’ira says It’s a long shot, but it’s worth a try…he’s the best smuggler around, he’s slipped through the Empire’s fingers more times than anyone else… -
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TRANSITIONS to Han sitting down at table -
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TRANSITIONS to Lando introducing himself as he says Captain Lando Calrissian -
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TRANSITIONS to Chewie watching behind a pillar, as Han says Looks like you’re, uhh, having a good day, and Lando says I’m a lucky guy -
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CUT to Lando saying Oh, I’ve won a lot of things…, as he takes a drink, and then says …I once won a sub=tropical woman named Oceaan Belt…
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(NOTE - I MIGHT include Han turning to alien next to him, and saying “Eyes on your own cards buddy!” at this point, and then CUT to close-up of Lando holding two cards (immediately after Han says “…now I see yours!”), before I then TRANSITION to twin aliens twittering in foreground, with Han in background - NOT SURE YET)
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NOTE - I WAS JUST GOING TO CUT AT THE ABOVE MOMENT TO SHOW THAT HAN HAD WON THE FALCON, BUT I MIGHT JUST CONTINUE WITH LANDO CHEATING, AND THEN BEING CONVINCED BY Q’IRA AND BECKETT TO DO A JOB FOR THEM USING THE FALCON -
VERY LATEST IDEA - SHOULD I INCLUDE SHOT OF ‘Q’IRA’ WATCHING HAN GAMBLING NEAR THE END OF THE SCENE WHEN HAN HAS WON, AS A WAY OF RE-INTRODUCING HER INTO MY OVERALL STORYLINE?? - OR SHOULD I JUST START OF THIS ENTIRE ‘GAMBLING’ SCENE WITH THE COOL ‘Q’IRA’ LEADING HAN, LANDO, AND BECKETT INTO THE ‘GAMBLING DEN’ SHOT?? ALSO, SHOULD I JUST HAVE LANDO CHEATING AT THIS PARTICULAR GAME, AND THEN BEING (PRESUMABLY) TOLD BY ALIEN THAT Q’IRA IS AROUND?, AND THEN ASKING HAN WHERE HIS SHIP IS, BEFORE Q’UIRA AND BECKETT INTERVINE TO OFFER HIM A SHARE IN A JOB FOR THE USE OF HIS SHIP??
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ADDITIONAL NOTE TO WHAT I’VE WRITTEN BELOW - I’M NOT SURE IF I WANT TO INCLUDE GOOD SCENE OF BECKETT PLAYING ‘HOLO-CHESS’ WITH CHEWIE AND TALKING TO HAN (BUT RE-EDITED SLIGHTLY), OR NOT…AS I REALLY DISLIKE THAT THE PRISTINE INTERIOR IS SO RADICALLY DIFFERENT-LOOKING TO HOW IT LOOKS IN THE ORIGINAL TRILOGY!
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FINISH OFF SHOTS HERE! - MY MUCH-LONGER VERSION WHICH SHOWS IDEAS FOR HOW I’D INCLUDE THE ACTUAL ‘COAXIUM HEIST’ IS NOW ON PAGE 5!
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TRANSITIONS to old woman starting to draw the circular Crimson Dawn symbol -
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TRANSITIONS to close-up of Q’ira hiding her Crimson Dawn skin symbol -
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TRANSITIONS to close-up of Beckett saying Says you! -
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TRANSITIONS to girl saying No…says them! -
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TRANSITIONS to more marauders taking their masks off, as the girl says …of our worlds has been brutalised by the sydicates… -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett, Han, Q’ira, and Chewie, as Beckett says And what would you use it for? -
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TRANSITIONS to close-up of girl saying The same thing my mother would have used it for, if she had survived and still wore the mask…to fight back!.. -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett, Han, Q’ira, and Chewie, as the girl says …we’re not marauders… -
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TRANSITIONS to close-up of the girl saying …we’re allies…and the war has just begun! -
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ADD MORE PICS HERE SOMETIME, where Efyins Nest takes off helmet, and has a drink before telling Han, Chewie, Beckett, and Q’ira about the rebellion etc. - HOWEVER, FALCON NO LONGER IN BACKGROUND, AS LANDO FLEW AWAY IN IT DURING SHOTS I’M DISCARDING! (BUT DO I END SEQUENCE WITH CLOSE-UP OF GIRL, AND THEN CUT TO CHEWIE WATCHING BECKETT AND HAN TALK IN SOME WAY…OR DO I CUT FROM CLOSE-UP OF GIRL TO ‘JUMP-AHEAD’ WHERE ALIEN GANGMEMBERS ARRIVE??) - I PREVIOUSLY wrote this.
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TRANSITIONS to waves crashing on rocks -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett waiting -
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TRANSITIONS to close-up of Chewie watching (and girl too) -
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TRANSITIONS to Chewie watching Han walking towards Beckett in distance -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett turning around as Han walks towards him, as Han says You know we can’t give the coaxium to Dryden Voss, and Beckett says Joining the cause Han Solo?, as Han says Just tryin’ to make it out alive -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett saying Got a plan?, as Han says Yeah… -
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TRANSITIONS to Han saying …beginning of one…we’re gonna get our money and get out from under the thumb of Crimson Dawn at the same time -
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TRANSITIONS to girl turning round -
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TRANSITIONS to Chewie turning round as he growls -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett saying I see…lot of ways this could go south…and only one where it doesn’t -
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TRANSITIONS to Han saying Why I need my partner -
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TRANSITIONS to Han’s face as Beckett says …I’m leaving…if you’re smart…
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett tapping Han’s face a couple of times -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett waving -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett looking at Han before turning to walk away -
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TRANSITIONS to Han looking round -
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett turning to say If by some miracle you make it outta here…find me on Tattooine -
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TRANSITIONS to Han saying What’s on Tattooine?, as Beckett says Heard about a job…
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TRANSITIONS to Beckett saying …big shot gangster putting together a crew…that’ll be the one
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TRANSITIONS to Han saying The one?, as Beckett says My last score -
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ADD MORE PICS HERE - WHEN I COME TO DRYDEN VOSS, I COULD HAVE HIM TELLING HAN THAT HE WOULD BELIEVE HIM BECAUSE THE COAXIUM LOOKS LIKE THE REAL THING EXCEPT HIS ASSOCIATE ALREADY TOLD HIM ABOUT HIS PLAN TO ROB HIM OF HIS MONEY, AND GIVE THE REAL COAXIUM TO ENFYS NEST…THEN CUT DIRECTLY TO CLOSE-UP OF SITTING Q’IRA LOOKING SCARED AS DRYDEN SHOUTS THAT Q’IRA IT TURNS OUT HAS A WEAK SPOT FOR YOU, AND WE’LL DEAL WITH THAT LATER…THEN GETS OFF CHAIR AND PUTS THE COAXIUM ON TABLE AS HE SAYS NO, I’M TALKING ABOUT MY OTHER ASSOCIATE…AS HE PICKS UP A DEVICE AND ASKS HIM TO COME IN AND JOIN THEM…AS THEY TURN TO SEE BECKETT COME IN.
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NOT 100% SURE HOW I’M DOING THE ABOVE SCENES AND DIALOGUE BETWEEN BECKETT AND HAN YET. wAS ORIGINALLY JUST GOING TO HAVE BECKETT LEAVING FOR TATTOOINE AND WALKING AWAY FROM HAN (POSSIBLY NOT WAVING AND GIRL WAVING BACK, NOT SURE YET), BUT…MIGHT…BE ABLE TO SHOW HAN’S ‘PLAN’ TO FOOL DRYDEN AND BECKETT, WITH HAN SHOOTING BECKETT - NOT SURE YET, AND WOULD ENFYS NEST TRUST HAN WITH THE COAXIUM?, OR RISK SOMETHING GOING WRONG WITH THE PLAN, AND DRYDEN GETTING IT?, RATHER THAN JUST TAKING IT THERE AND THEN AS SOON AS IT’S REFINED?..OR DOES SHE TRUST THEM HOPING THEY WILL JOIN HER AS AN ALLY? - AND HOW DO I HANDLE Q’IRA? - DO I JUST HAVE THE SHIP LEAVING WITH HER LOOKING OUT WISTFULLY? - OR DO I HAVE HER TAKING THE RING OFF DRYDEN AND PUTTING IT IN THE CONTROLS FIRST? - OR DO I CUT FROM HAN SHOOTING BECKETT TO HIM AND CHEWIE WALKING TOWARDS GIRL AND MARAUDERS WITH COAXIUM CANISTERS? - OR DO I FIRST SHOW HAN RUNNING OVER TO BECKETT, BUT DON’T HAVE BECKETT SAYING ANYTHING BEFORE HE DIES - IS THIS EVEN POSSIBLE?
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TRANSITIONS to old woman being unmasked -
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VERY, VERY LATEST IDEA, regardless of what else is written above or below - CUT to close-up of coaxium being loaded onto the marauder’s speederbikes (as Efyns Nest has enough forces to take it regardless of what Becket and co. want!) -
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TRANSITIONS to girl saying No…it’s the blood that brings life to something new
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TRANSITIONS to girl saying The rebellion!
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TRANSITIONS to Han raises his eyebrows as the girl says You could come with us you know…
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TRANSITIONS to girl saying …we need warriors and leaders like you
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NOTE - NOT SURE yet how I’m going to alter the dialogue in this final scene - there’s a slim chance I might even remove the shot of the Falcon flying up from the ‘jungle’ planet, to just show the interior…as this would allow for them flying away from the ‘desert’ planet, BUT I DOUBT THAT I WILL.
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(NOTE - SOME OF THIS BELOW WAS WRITTEN BEFORE I DECIDED ON THE FINAL ORDER OF SCREENSHOTS SHOWN ABOVE)
THEN EVENTUALLY DO A RE-EDIT OF THE SCENE WHERE HAN AND CHEWIE AND THE GANG ARE TALKING AROUND THE FIRE AT NIGHT (IF I INCLUDE THE HAN AND THE GIRL SPEEDER CHASE AT THE BEGINNING, WILL I NEED TO INCORPORATE HAN SAYING THE “I GOT OUT, SHE DIDN’T” LINE BESIDE THE CAMP FIRE?)…THEN CONTINUE ON AS WE SEE THE TRAIN HEIST, AND END/(FADE OUT??) WITH BECKETT APOLOGISING FOR HITTING HAN, AS HAN SAYS IT HAPPENS MORE OFTEN THAN HE THINKS (WITH THE ODD RE-EDIT HERE AND THERE THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE SEQUENCE)…
THEN CUT/(FADE IN??) TO CLAPPING AS WE SEE HAN GOING TO APPROACH LANDO TO GAMBLE FOR THE FALCON WITH HIM, AND WINNING (WITH Q’IRA EDITED OUT)…
THEN CUT TO THE BATTERED FALCON LANDING ON A SANDY PLANET, AS HAN AND CHEWIE UNLOAD SOME PRESUMABLY STOLEN OR SMUGGLED COAXIUM, AS AN INJURED LANDO TELLS HAN HE NEVER WANTS TO SEE HIM AGAIN, AND WALKS OFF IN DISGUST, AS HAN TURNS TOWARDS US…AND SHOT FADES TO BLACK (NOTE - BECKETT IS SEEN TALKING IN THE BACKGROUND, PRESUMABLY HAVING DONE THIS LATEST JOB WITH HAN, CHEWIE, AND LANDO…SO I MIGHT ALSO ADD IN ONE OF THE TWO SHOTS OF HIM LOOKING AT THE HIDDEN COAXIUM UNDER THE FLOOR PANELS) -
…THEN INSTEAD OF ANY IRIS/END CREDITS MUSIC, I MIGHT JUST SHOW THE LUCASFILM LOGO SILENTLY FADE INTO VIEW AGAIN, THEN FADE OUT AGAIN. (OR COULD JUST HAVE IT SHOWING ONCE, IF I ONLY USE BLUE ‘A LONG TIME AGO IN A GALAXY FAR, FAR AWAY…’ WORDING AS AN INTRO.)
MY VERY LATEST IDEA ON THIS - DUE TO WANTING A KEEP A BIT MORE OF THE ‘WORLD-BUILDING’ OF NEW STAR WARSY SETTINGS SUCH AS ‘CORELLIA’, I’VE DECIDED TO TURN THIS INTO A KIND OF ‘BACKSTORY ADVENTURE/DOUBLE MINI-FEATURE’ NOW, WHICH COMBINES MY SOLO SEQUENCES AND OBI-WAN KENOBI SEQUENCES INTO ONE SINGLE, JOINT POST-‘PREQUELS’/PRE-‘ORIGINAL TRILOGY’ FEATURE INVOLVING ‘SHORT ADVENTURES’ FROM THEIR ‘YOUNGER’ YEARS! - SO AFTER WE SEE THE FINAL SHOT OF HAN TURNING TO FACE US, I’D THEN (PERHAPS) CUT TO THE COPPER-COLOURED ‘LUCASFILM’ LOGO, THEN CUT TO THE ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TITLE, THEN CUT TO MY FIRST OBI-WAN KENOBI SCENE.
OR…PERHAPS I’D EVEN CUT TOGETHER MY SHORTENED VERSIONS OF ‘SOLO’, ‘THE BOOK OF BOBA FETT’, AND ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TO MAKE A ‘TRIPLE’ MINI-FEATURE, WITH EACH STORY JUST SEPERATED BY A FADE TO BLACK IN-BETWEEN THEM, OR SEPERATED BY THE SILENT, RECEEDING ‘STAR WARS’ TITLE, OR SEPERATED BY THE SILENT BLUE WORDING.
MY VERY, VERY LATEST IDEAS ON THIS - I MIGHT decide to cut from Han and Q’ira running away on Correlia…to the ACTUAL SOUND of the planet sunrise shot, and CONTINUE ON for a bit as Han and Chewie interact a little (as I like the music and visuals of flying through the clouds)…BEFORE then seeing Han lying on the snowy ground with Beckett and Val, planning a heist - I’m NOT 100% sure where I want to cut short Han and Chewie’s dialogue together, but I MIGHT end on Han saying Thanks for getting me out of there as they both face forward, and CUT to them both still facing forward as Han asks So what’s your name anyway?, and Chewie ROARS, and I end on Han’s mouth still shut…and CUT to Han’s close-up as he says Yeah, well, your gonna need a nickname ‘cos I ain’t sayin’ that every time!, as chewie growls and we then see Han and Beckett and Val lying on the snow. - **I THINK IT SOUNDS FUNNIER THIS WAY IF WE DON’T HEAR HAN SAYING CHEWBACCA’S NAME!, AND MAKES CHEWBACCA MORE MYSTERIOUS AND POWERFUL IF HE STAYS SILENT UNTIL HE EVENTUALLY ROARS HIS NAME AT HAN - BUT NOT SURE YET IF I WANT TO MAKE OUT THAT HAN AND CHEWIE HAVE BEEN BUDDIE’S FOR A WHILE, AND WOULD ALREADY KNOW HIS NAME!
ALSO, I MIGHT recut the group interaction so that it flows with a harder edge like this, with much less dialogue throughout, BUT I’M NOT 100% SURE YET - The end of the scene where they are lying on the snow ends with Val saying Well you better be right, 'cos sometimes you put your faith in the wrong people, as Han looks around at her, as we continue with them walking through snow as Val continues to say Our whole future depends on this one score, and you bring in amateurs, as Beckett replies In case you hadn’t noticed, we’re a little short handed*, as we continue on a sunset ridge as Val says So we get who we need, the Zan sisters, or, or Bossk…then CUT to Han beside a fire saying **Look, I waited a long time for a shot like this, I’m not about to screw it up, alright?*, as we continue with Val clicking her big gun, as we continue with 4-armed alien pointing a knife as he says Oh come on Val, you look so sincere, as he puts knife down and climbs a wall saying Plus, have you ever tried to disinvite a Wookiee to anything?, not a good idea!…as we CUT to (silent) Chewie putting on his bandolero, as Han smirks, and Beckett kisses a handgun which he throws to Han, as we see the handgun against the fire, and then see the monotrain sparking on the rail. - THIS SHOWS US EVERYONE IN THE GROUP BEFORE THE HEIST, AND GIVES CHEWIE A POWERFUL MOMENT AS HE STAYS SILENT, AND LEAVES OUT ALL MENTION OF Q’IRA.
UPDATED LATEST THOUGHTS - I’m now wanting to show a re-edited version of the WHOLE 'Han and Q’ira escaping with a vial of coaxium in a stolen speeder as my introduction to Han…FOLLOWED by Han and Chewie ALREADY BUDDIES when they join a major coaxium heist from a monorail (NOTE- It could be imagined that the way I’ve recut the initial dialogue between Han and Chewie implies that Han either let Q’ira have the vial’s worth coaxium to make a new life for herself, or she double-crossed him (the scheming bitch!)…leaving him still ‘in debt’ to someone, meaning he had to get involved with this heist to make enough money to free himself and his buddy Chewie from it…except it doesn’t work out due to the coaxium shipment blowing up, and he eventually ends up gambling for Lando’s ship, and gets involved in smuggling escapades with it thereafter to keep the ‘Crimson Dawn’ syndicate off off his and Chewie’s back (briefly involving Beckett and Lando along the way also (LANDO IS STILL PEE’D OFF ABOUT LOSING THE FALCON AFTER FINDING OUT THAT HAN DIDN’T HAVE A SHIP OF HIS OWN TO GAMBLE WITH IN THE FIRST PLACE!)…leading into how we still find Han and Chewie together in STAR WARS:A NEW HOPE.
REMEMBER - I wanted to incorporate a scene (or was it 2 scenes?) of Beckett looking at coaxium heating up.
ABSOLUTE LATEST IDEAS…PERHAPS? - when Lando walks away from Han towards the Falcon, that’s the final time we would see him in this re-edit, and then CUT to Han, Chewie, Beckett, and Q’ira walking up towards the bar, before they encounter Enfys Nest and her marauders (I’D CUT OUT JOKEY HAN WALKING FORWARD AND THE FALCON TAKING OFF), as Enfys tells them about what happened to the people of various planets…then TRANSITION to Chewie looking out at Han walking towards Beckett in the distance…then CUT to Chewie looking out as Q’ira tell Enfys that Han is going to help…then TRANSITION to Beckett telling Han I see…(ETC) and that he’s leaving and mentions that he going to Tattooine for one last score as we end on Han’s serious face…then CUT to Beckett leaving down hill, as we end on Han’s serious face…then CUT to 2 kids standing in foreground as Han and Chewie carry a lot of coaxium up to Enfys, and she gives him a small vial of it before they leave…then CUT to close-up of switches as Han mentions that Beckett told him about a gangster’s job, and they fly off in the Falcon…THEN CUT to alien gangmembers entering Enfys Nest’s camp and surrounding Enfys and her marauders, telling them to drop their weapons…then CUT to the actual girl launching a surprise attack on the alien gangmembers, as she and her marauders kill them all…then CUT to black, and finish with the silent Lucasfilm logo??? - NEW THOUGHTS ON THIS, IT’S ALL WRONG! - INSTEAD, I’M NOW DEFINITELY KEEPING SCENE OF HAN AND CHEWIE FLYING OFF IN THE FALCON TO LIGHTSPEED AND DICE FOR MY ENDING, NO MATTER HOW I RE-EDIT IT SLIGHTLY.
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**STILL TO ADD PICS BELOW SHOWING HOW I’D RE-EDIT THE USUAL STORYLINE OF HAN, Q’IRA, AND CHEWIE TAKING THE COAXIUM TO DRYDEN VOSS’S SHIP, AND THEN BEING BETRAYED BY BECKETT ETC., TO SEE WHETHER I’D PREFER TO HAVE IT PLAY OUT THIS WAY SO THAT I’D BE ABLE TO INCORPORATE, MY RE-EDITED VERSION OF HAN SHOOTING BECKETT, AND THEN SHOWING THE SCENE OF HAN AND CHEWIE RETURNING THE COAXIUM CONTAINERS TO THE GIRL AND HER MARAUDERS. NOTE - NOT SURE AT THIS POINT IF I REALLY WANT TO SHOW Q’IRA LEAVING IN DRYDEN VOSS’S SHIP OR NOT.
TRANSITIONS to Han saying …were gonna get our money, and get out from under the thumb of Crimson Dawn at the same time -
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