This is nice!
I liked you removed the reversed speed close up of vader when he sees Luke ;)
Tho even i like what you did in the dialogue i think you ve messed a bit the close up/medium shot timing. It changes way to fast :)
I like the cuts on the fleet shots. Still ackbar says on my mark, but lando seems to go to hyperspace from his own. I dont know if you want to add some kind of altered dialogue. maybe its just me..
Good work :)
-Angel